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Hellion Drakis
Posts : 44 Reputation : 0 Join date : 2009-09-27 Age : 30 Location : Magnar
| Subject: Warforged Mon Oct 05, 2009 6:53 pm | |
| Name:Warforged Type: Good Classes:(Types of War Forged) - Warrior - Sorcerer - Scout - Ranger - Stalker Elite Classes: (Given by a Iron Lord) - Sliver Knight (Elite class - Can only be gained after killing other players) - Metal Wizard (Elite class - Can only be gained after killing other players) Legendary Classes:(After the Elite Class, Given by a IL) - Gold Lord (Legendary class - Can only be gained after killing many other players) - Steel Mage (Legendary class - Can only be gained after killing many other players) Epic Class:(Leader of a group) - Iron King (Epic class - Can only be gained after being a complete fighter and leader of good) Created: Imbuing souls into human like golems (prepared with certain gifts) Age: New:25 years Old:2 million years Description:Iron humans with weapon of steel from the last war. They have great intelligence. They require when using powerful and/or multiple magics to rest for 6 hours because they have depleted their magic gem and reserves. If any gets damaged they food eat to repair them selfs though Nanotech. They have computer memory that can access any Computer w/out Fire walls. They are good because their souls come from Heros. Each War forged has a Ghulra (I.D/Symbol) on their fore head. Their Insignia is on their left and right solders. History:Before the First Explorers came to the land the titans created a safe guard called "Titutanus". One day, 25 years a go they stumbled upon and activated a warrior called Gultinis ,Iron King of The Warriors of Iron. He started 5 year later to rebuild the War Forged. He nows reawakens the rest and the army moves into the castle of warriors. A fraction of the Warforged fromed the War raiders to band with the Demons. Insignias Winged Shield with a sword facing down - The Warriors of Iron (Group thats Good and works with the last order of warriors) Pic of Gultinis
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Deathwing Administrator
Posts : 200 Reputation : 0 Join date : 2009-09-26 Age : 30 Location : Zemun, Serbia
| Subject: Re: Warforged Tue Oct 06, 2009 12:49 am | |
| Great race, but improve your description and it'll be 90% approved.... | |
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Greymare
Posts : 58 Reputation : 1 Join date : 2009-09-26 Location : Trol'Akar
| Subject: Re: Warforged Tue Oct 06, 2009 10:46 am | |
| Interesting...But it's a bit too, common, its like golem-men. | |
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Hellion Drakis
Posts : 44 Reputation : 0 Join date : 2009-09-27 Age : 30 Location : Magnar
| Subject: Re: Warforged Tue Oct 06, 2009 6:35 pm | |
| I'm Doing this as an ode to the game it's based off of. | |
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Taiion Methuselah Lucifer
Posts : 63 Reputation : 1 Join date : 2009-09-26 Age : 30
| Subject: Re: Warforged Thu Oct 08, 2009 4:28 pm | |
| Hmmm, i say innapproved, the description lacks detail, and why would anyone want to wait six hours until they can cast another spell? work on it. | |
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Hellion Drakis
Posts : 44 Reputation : 0 Join date : 2009-09-27 Age : 30 Location : Magnar
| Subject: Re: Warforged Fri Oct 09, 2009 4:42 pm | |
| Worked on it and an Epic Class. I have 3 Mech God
Mech Angel
True Mech Lord
Guys, which one is the winner? | |
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Nicanor
Posts : 42 Reputation : 1 Join date : 2009-09-27 Location : fckin' n00b
| Subject: Re: Warforged Sat Oct 10, 2009 12:25 am | |
| What about you remove 'Mech'? Iron Lord Iron Angel Steel God. | |
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Deathwing Administrator
Posts : 200 Reputation : 0 Join date : 2009-09-26 Age : 30 Location : Zemun, Serbia
| Subject: Re: Warforged Sat Oct 10, 2009 2:05 am | |
| Like Nicanor's idea... Sounds better | |
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Dragonson
Posts : 44 Reputation : 4 Join date : 2009-10-05
| Subject: Re: Warforged Sat Oct 10, 2009 7:15 am | |
| Hellion, you should add a story to theese. I like the race IDEA, but where did theese come from? A race of iron golems emerging out of nowhere is... lame? =( Sorry to say it, but in my opinion we need some more background story. You COULD remix them to be some kind of defence mechanisms the titans placed in Magnar a long time ago, deep beneath the earth, (what they were to defend against is unknown.) and then deathwing's emerging awakened them. That would be cool =) | |
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Taiion Methuselah Lucifer
Posts : 63 Reputation : 1 Join date : 2009-09-26 Age : 30
| Subject: Re: Warforged Sat Oct 10, 2009 7:25 am | |
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Dragonson
Posts : 44 Reputation : 4 Join date : 2009-10-05
| Subject: Re: Warforged Sat Oct 10, 2009 7:46 am | |
| Thanks flat =) (is it okay i call you that? I could call you Taiion, TML, Tai, T or whatever you want, but i just like flat better. Hope thats okay =S) | |
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Hellion Drakis
Posts : 44 Reputation : 0 Join date : 2009-09-27 Age : 30 Location : Magnar
| Subject: Re: Warforged Sat Oct 10, 2009 8:13 am | |
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Dragonson
Posts : 44 Reputation : 4 Join date : 2009-10-05
| Subject: Re: Warforged Sat Oct 10, 2009 8:16 am | |
| Hmmm.... i'm not really sure i understand some of it. Could you check the spelling please? Cause i think some of it is spelled wrong.
For example: What does "If any gets damaged they food eat to repair them selfs." mean? Sorry, i just can't make sense of that sentance <=( | |
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Hellion Drakis
Posts : 44 Reputation : 0 Join date : 2009-09-27 Age : 30 Location : Magnar
| Subject: Re: Warforged Sat Oct 10, 2009 8:22 am | |
| What else you think needs fixing? | |
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Deathwing Administrator
Posts : 200 Reputation : 0 Join date : 2009-09-26 Age : 30 Location : Zemun, Serbia
| Subject: Re: Warforged Sat Oct 10, 2009 8:23 am | |
| Read it yourself Hellion, you should know the best what needs fixing and what not... | |
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Dragonson
Posts : 44 Reputation : 4 Join date : 2009-10-05
| Subject: Re: Warforged Sat Oct 10, 2009 8:24 am | |
| Well, it makes much better sense now. Though, it would be cooler if they absorbed things like stone and various metals instead of food. Though DW is right. Its your race. | |
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Hellion Drakis
Posts : 44 Reputation : 0 Join date : 2009-09-27 Age : 30 Location : Magnar
| Subject: Re: Warforged Sat Oct 10, 2009 9:46 am | |
| Deathwing judgement, Please. | |
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